Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 E-book Now at Scribd

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrHey, e-book lovers, you can now find the ePub edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy novel—at digital subscription library Scribd! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

You’ll find Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 here at Scribd. Add it to your subscription queue today!

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is also available at Scribd. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then order Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!

Pandora Zwieback: The Evolution of a Series’ Covers

Last week, I covered the importance of having an editor involved in the creative process of writing a book’s manuscript, in a trio of posts found here, here, and here. But that’s just one part of what’s involved in putting together a novel for publication. Today, we start talking cover design.

Good stories are always essential, but from a sales point of view, one of the most important aspects of publishing is the cover. It’s the first thing a potential reader is going to see in a brick-and-mortar bookstore (unless it’s displayed spine-out on their shelves) or at an online retailer’s site, so it’s absolutely imperative that the cover be as eye-catching and intriguing as possible. The vast majority of small-press and self-published books often fail in that regard, choosing the laziest, most god-awful type-and-image designs they can throw together: photographs or paintings (or worse, silhouetted figures) that have nothing to do with the story; lettering taken straight from their computer’s font libraries; titles that are too long, or extremely pretentious, or head-scratchingly vague. (Truth be told, I’ve seen my fair share of books released by mainstream publishers that take the same approach.)

So in 2010, when it was time to transform StarWarp Concepts from a comic publisher to a book house, I knew that Job Two would involve using professional artists and designers to provide eye-catching covers (Job One was having quality stories to publish; can’t have the second without the first). The first person I approached was Bob Larkin, whose amazing cover paintings for Marvel Comics (Dazzler, Haunt of Horror, Vampire Tales, The Hulk!, Savage Sword of Conan the Barbarian, Crazy) and Bantam Books’ Doc Savage pulp-fiction reprints had created a fan base that included such luminaries as Alex Ross, Joe Jusko, John Romita Sr., Jim Steranko, and Larry Hama. I’ve been a fan myself, all the way back to the ’70s, and was thrilled when, in 2000, he agreed to paint the covers for my X-Men: The Chaos Engine Trilogy novels—and overjoyed when he did three cover paintings for SWC’s succubus character, Lorelei. This time, however, I wanted him to paint the covers for a series about a certain teenaged Goth chick.

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Explaining the gothy nature of Pan took a bit of doing, since it’s outside the range of anything Bob had ever painted before, but he had two advantages going in to the project: Pan had already been designed by my creative partner, Uriel Caton; and Bob has an extensive history of painting horror-related images, from monster magazine covers for Marvel and Warren Publishing to monster movie posters for New Line Cinema, United Artists, and Troma Films (among other studios)—Piranha, Night of the Creeps, Humanoids From the Deep, and The Toxic Avenger II are just some of the poster images he’s created.

But why use painted covers? you ask. Why not go with a photograph of a model dressed as Pan? That’s what all the major publishers would do. And that’s the problem, because when all the major publishers do the same thing, they create a uniform look for an entire genre of books that’s extremely generic and boring. (To get an idea of what I’m talking about, check out this post about photo covers that I wrote back in 2011.) I wanted Bob Larkin originals for Pan’s series, and that’s exactly what I was gonna get. All I needed to get the process started was to show Bob what I had in mind…

Next: Creating the cover for Blood Feud, the first novel in Pan’s saga.

Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 E-book On Sale at iTunes

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrHey, e-book lovers, now you can purcahse the ePub edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy novel—at Apple’s iBookstore! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

You’ll find Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 here at iTunes. Order it today!

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is still available from iTunes. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then purchase Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!

Editing Blood Feud: How It All Turned Out

blood_feud_largeThe short answer is, if you’ve read it you know how Blood Feud: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 1 ultimately turned out: amazing story, critically acclaimed, loved by dozens. 😉 The longer answer’s a little more complicated—and amusing, in a terrifying sort of way…

In the last two posts I explained how, after sitting down to discuss the first-draft manuscript with my friend and editor Howard Zimmerman—and agreeing with pretty much everything he had to say about what a poor-ass story I’d told—I was faced with the task of not just rewriting half the book, but cutting a sizable chunk of the almost 500-page doorstop he’d had to edit. A barrage of back-and-forth e-mails followed, in which I described to Howard my plans for the rebuilding; thankfully, he agreed with them. And how I stumbled into writing what became for me the linchpin scene of the book, simply by the luck of a song playing on the radio as I was going over my notes: James Taylor’s rendition of “Up On The Roof.”

Now it was time to get to work. I went back to the beginning and started revising Pan right from her introduction. Out came the overwhelming combativeness and snark and “airhead moments” (to use Howard’s term) that made her a fairly unlikable character; in came a smarter, more introspective girl with a macabre sense of humor. Mom and Dad no longer hated each other. Dave Zwieback stopped being a dick. Annie wasn’t going to put the moves on him. And the angry tone of the first draft melted away, replaced by a cast of characters who actually cared for one another and, I thought, were pretty damn funny and likable. Except for the vampires—they were still evil assholes.

And then, before I knew it, it was done. Completed. At last I had a draft I was happy with. This, I felt, was now a story worth telling. And a good thing, too: the book was originally scheduled for April 2011, but I’d already blown the production deadlines for that to happen. So June became the new release month. There was just one problem: Howard didn’t have time to edit it—at least not in time for me to get the book out in June.

See, Howard just isn’t an editor, he’s got his own business to run: Z File, Inc., a book packaging company that’s produced some huge fiction and nonfiction graphic novels for major publishing houses: the science titles The Stuff of Life and Evolution: The Story of Life; adaptations of Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451, The Martian Chronicles, and Something Wicked This Way Comes; and the New York Times bestseller, Health Care Reform: What It Is, Why It’s Necessary, How It Works. When I’d dropped the first draft of Blood Feud on his table I’d been lucky enough to catch him during a lull in his schedule. But now? He had two projects in the middle of production and wouldn’t be able to tackle my second draft for about a month.

My reaction? “Oh. Yeah, no, I understand. That’s cool. Well, uh…then I hope you like it in book form.”

I hope you like it in book form.

That’s right: the second draft of Blood Feud became the final draft with some tweaking that continued all the way up to the final, printed book. Without my editor looking it over. I sent the Word file off to designer Mat Postawa for typesetting, and from there it ultimately went to the printer to become the book you know and love. 😀

Crazy, huh? Talk about taking a major risk! But I was so absolutely confident in what I’d accomplished, so positively certain that I’d addressed Howard’s concerns about the book and that this was the version of Pan’s story I’d always meant to tell, that I sent it to press.

And again, I lucked out. The book became a critical success; Pan has been referred to as a positive role model for girls; people have thanked me for creating a character with a weird-but-awesome name who’s so cool they’d love to be friends with her; one woman even remarked that Pan is so in tune with her own thoughts and feelings that the book must have been written by a female author.

The bottom line, though? None of that would have happened if I hadn’t listened to my editor the first time around. Blood Feud might have remained an angry book about angry people, and a project I’d either have killed or spent eternity regretting being published because the world turned out to hate the nasty, overwritten doorstop that was the first draft.

Thanks, Howard!

Editing Blood Feud: Up on the Roof

blood_feud_largeContinuing my tale—started in yesterday’s post—of the importance in having your writing edited, we pick up with what I consider to be the most important scene in my novel Blood Feud: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 1…a scene that didn’t exist in the first-draft manuscript.

Today is the first day of the rest of your life.

That was one of Grandma Ellie’s favorite sayings, usually uttered as encouragement in response to some major event experienced by a family member or close friend. The last time Pan had heard it was after Mom and Dad’s divorce had been finalized. Mom had spent a day crying her eyes out, and Grandma had said it to try and cheer her up. Until this morning Pan had never really understood the phrase, but around four a.m., as she lay in bed unable to sleep, its meaning suddenly became crystal clear.

A fresh start. A new beginning.

Annie had given her that, and so much more. Opened her eyes to a bright, magical world ready to be explored. Put an end to the constant fears about her sanity. Made her understand how special she truly was.

And so, just a little before five o’clock, Pan had gone up to the roof of Dad’s apartment building to welcome the new day—and her new life…

When I wrote the initial draft of Blood Feud, there was no sunrise greeting; no inner reflection; no moment when Pan realized she was more than her “monstervision”—her ability to see the monsters inhabiting the world that had been diagnosed as a psychological disorder when she was six. No real hope for her future.

As I mentioned in the previous post my editor, Howard Zimmerman, had pointed out how dark and angry the tone of the first draft was—a tone he was pretty sure I hadn’t meant to put into it. Pan, according to my descriptions to him, was supposed to be a “happy Goth” who feared her supposed mental problems but overall tried to live a pretty good life despite the obstacles in her way. And that girl, it turned out, was nowhere in the manuscript. Sure, there were flashes of happy Pan here and there, but she mostly spent Blood Feud being bitter and far too snarky—snarky to the point where even I, after rereading the pages, wanted to slap her. That needed to change, and quick. I needed to find a balance between angst-ridden Goth and loving young woman, or this character was going to be a major turn-off to every reader. And she was the star of the book!

And then, while making notes based on his edits, a song on the radio suddenly caught my attention: James Taylor’s cover of the Drifters’ 1962 hit “Up On the Roof,” and its lyrics by Carole King:

When this old world starts getting me down
And people are just too much for me to face
I climb way up to the top of the stairs
And all my cares just drift right into space
On the roof, it’s peaceful as can be
And there the world below can’t bother me…

As you may have figured out by now—if you’re a regular reader of this blog—my musical tastes tend to run all over the place (“eclectic” doesn’t begin to cover it). In prior posts I’ve written about how Murray Gold’s “This Is Gallifrey” composition from the Series 3 Doctor Who sound track influenced how I wrote the confrontation between Pan and the fallen angel Zaqiel at the end of Blood Feud; and how HorrorPops’ rockabilly girl-power tune “Missfit” became Pan’s anthem (“My fist! In the middle of your face!”). Well, here it was “Up On the Roof” that helped me to finally, truly understand who Pandora Zwieback was, and exactly how to find her center—and the heart of the story I was trying to tell.

Today is the first day of the rest of your life.

Those words just popped into my head, and immediately I could see Pan sitting on a rooftop, watching the sun come up as she drank coffee in a Frankenstein mug. A quiet moment, a pause for breath between dramatic scenes—a time when Pan could process everything that had been revealed to her by Annie in a previous chapter and realize she wasn’t a freak, wasn’t alone, wasn’t destined to live a miserable life. The moment when she stopped being a damaged soul, a misfit, and became a stronger young woman. There was a new world before her, waiting to be explored, and she couldn’t wait to take the first step toward it.

And I couldn’t wait to write it.

As clichéd as it sounds, the words flowed from me into the keyboard. It turned out to be the easiest chapter to write—and the shortest (4 pages)—and for me it became the scene around which the entire book revolves. It also completely eliminated the dickish qualities Dave Zwieback had exhibited in the first draft; now he was the loving, supportive father he was always meant to be. A win-win situation all around, then.

Tomorrow: how it all turned out.

“So, now…” Dad reached back and pulled [Pan’s] sketch from his pocket, then unfolded the paper and held it up to the lightening sky. The warm colors she’d chosen for the drawing shone even brighter. “This, I like a lot. It’s so different from your usual dark stuff. Very colorful. Very . . .” He smiled. “Dare I say, lighthearted?”

Pan grinned.

“It’s a new style,” she said. “For a new me.”

Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 On Sale at Amazon UK

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrNever fear, Panatics of Great Britain and Europe: the highly anticipated Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy follow-up to Blood Feud: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 1—is now available for order from Amazon UK, in both print and Kindle-compatible editions! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

You’ll find the trade paperback edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 here at Amazon UK. And you can purchase the Kindle-compatible e-book edition here at the UK Kindle Store. Order it today!

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is still available from Amazon UK, in both print and Kindle-compatible editions. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then purchase Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!

Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 On Sale at B&N

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrFirst the ePub edition hit the Nook Store; now Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy follow-up to Blood Feud: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 1—is available in print form from Barnes & Noble! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

You’ll find the trade paperback edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 here at B&N. And you can purchase the ePub edition here at the Nook Store. Order it today!

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is still available in print and e-book editions from B&N. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then purchase Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!

Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 On Sale at Amazon

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrWell, it was a bit of a surprise (to me, at least) when the Kindle version hit first—I’m more of a traditional print publisher type, you understand—but good news, folks who love to hold an actual book in your hands: You can now find the print edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy follow-up to Blood Feud: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 1—available at Amazon.com! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

You’ll find the trade paperback edition of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 here at Amazon. And you can purchase the Kindle-compatible e-book edition here at the Kindle Store. Order it today!

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is still available from Amazon, in both print and Kindle-compatible editions. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then purchase Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!

Happy Will Eisner Week!

WEW_2015_Poster150If you’re a regular reader of this blog, one thing you should know by now is that I’m a firm believer in promoting literacy. And what better way these days to get adults, teens, and kids interested in reading than through graphic novels? Why, it makes such perfect sense that I bet you’re even aware there’s a yearly literacy event to help get the ball rolling!

Wait—you’re not? Then let me clue you in…

Will Eisner Week is an annual celebration, held this week from March 1 to March 7, and is run by the Will and Ann Eisner Family Foundation. It promotes literacy, graphic novels, free speech, and the legacy of the late Will Eisner, who would have turned 98 on March 6. Eisner, for those of you who might be unfamiliar with his work, was the creator of the 1940s masked crimefighter The Spirit, and one of the founding fathers of American graphic novels. A Contract with God, A Life Force, Dropsie Avenue, and The Dreamer are just some of the fascinating tales Eisner wrote and drew, featuring ordinary people in extraordinary (and sometimes not-so-extraordinary) situations. And even though he passed away in 2005, Eisner continues to inspire generations of writers and artists. Events are being held this week around the world; visit the Will Eisner Week website for more information.

StarWarp Concepts, of course, has its share of graphic novels, and we’d have no problem at all if you happened them to order them as your reading material for this special week. Check out the following titles—they might just pique your interest:

pan_annualThe Saga of Pandora Zwieback Annual #1: Although it may not be a graphic novel, at 56 pages it’s still a pretty thick comic book, with three stories of Pan and the monsters that live in her New York City hometown. And as a Panatic, you’d no doubt be interested in seeing Pan star in her first, full-length comic book adventure—right? The Saga of Pandora Zwieback Annual #1 is a full-color special that contains stories by Steven A. Roman (that’s me, the author of the Pandora Zwieback novels Blood Feud and Blood Reign) and Sholly Fisch (Scooby-Doo Team-Up, The All-New Batman: The Brave and the Bold), and art by Eliseu Gouveia (The Saga of Pandora Zwieback #0) and comic-art legend Ernie Colon (Amethyst, Princess of Gemworld). It’s available in both print and e-book formats, so visit the Saga of Pandora Zwieback Annual #1 product page for all the ordering information, as well as sample pages.

troubleshooters_lrg_coverTroubleshooters, Incorporated: Night Stalkings: Perfect for superhero fans, this graphic novel is about a supernatural team of superfolk-for-hire, consisting of a wizard, a sorceress, a female ninja, a high-tech-armor-wearing rock concert lighting designer, and a werewolf. Not every superhero team has Tony Stark’s billions to play with, you understand, and the Troubleshooters are just looking to earn a living while fighting the monsters that have always lurked in the shadows. Makes sense, right? Of course it does! Written by the husband-and-wife team of Richard C. White (The Chronicles of the Sea Dragon Special) and Joni M. White, and illustrated by Reggie Golden and Randy Zimmerman, Night Stalkings presents the TSI members on their first mission: protecting a multimillionaire from a trio of Middle Eastern demons out to raise a little hell! And like the Pan Annual, it’s available in both print and e-book formats, so visit the Troubleshooters, Incorporated: Night Stalkings product page for all the ordering information, as well as sample pages.

Happy reading!

Blood Reign: Pandora Zwieback 2 E-books at StarWarp Concepts Webstore

Blood-Reign-FinalCvrThe headline pretty much says it all: You can now purchase all e-book editions of Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2—my young adult, dark-urban-fantasy novel—directly from the StarWarp Concepts webstore! Here’s the synopsis:

She was stabbed in the heart with an ancient mystical spear. Her mother was kidnapped by a band of vampires led by a fallen angel—their goal: unleashing hell on earth. And every living creature on the planet faces extinction at the hands of a race of biblical monsters. But for Pandora Zwieback, the worst may be yet to come.

In this terrifying next chapter of the story begun in the critically acclaimed novel Blood Feud, join the teenaged Goth adventuress as she discovers that death is only the beginning of her saga…

Blood Reign is available in mobi (Kindle compatible), ePub, and PDF formats, each for just $2.99, so visit the Blood Reign: The Saga of Pandora Zwieback, Book 2 product page for all the purchasing links—not to mention a free, downloadable chapter that you can also snag.

And don’t forget: the first Pandora Zwieback novel, Blood Feud, is also available, in the same formats, for $2.99 from the SWC webstore. Want to know how Pan begins her saga? Then purchase Blood Feud and Blood Reign and get started reading!